breathing

i really love it- the colors, the shapes, etc- the only thing that bugs me is the font- it's very jagged & clashes with the smooth sleek feel of the rest of the piece- in fact, it's really a big distraction. when certain details don't work, (even details that seem so minor, such as a font), it is much more noticable when everything else about the piece is really great- which is how something so seemingly trivial could throw off the whole design. i would love to see it with a nicer font that fits better with the design, or even without a font at all, bc everything else is perfect & works well. =^._.^=